When I say “new writing,” I mean writing generated on the spot to a prompt, like the writing that I do in generative writing workshops. In new writing, I get my stream of consciousness down onto the page. It flows, but it’s not usually good writing. It needs to be more concise, more vivid.
In Anne Lamott’s words, I have a “shitty first draft.” Now I can revise, combing through my material as many times as it takes to get it to sing. Is it rhythmical? Does it have memorable metaphors and images? I bring poetry into my prose.
Skillful Feedback
Receiving skillful feedback is a way to learn and grow as a writer. I discover what’s working and what’s not. And I learn how to give feedback.
Everyone has something strong in what they write. For some it’s the structure, how in a brief ten minute write, they manage to circle back to their beginning. They’re able to make raw writing feel polished with a strong ending, a lasting image.
Or they use poetic language, word play, puns, alliteration. They have a startling gift for finding metaphors in nature as they describe a walk. Or they share insights as they learn about themselves.
Learning How to Sing
When I’m giving feedback, I jot down notes as I listen, so I can remember to give back the phrases I especially like, the ones that caught my ear or caught my heart. This positive reinforcement helps me to continue doing the things I do well. The writing that isn’t commented on isn’t bad or uninteresting.
It just needs to be brought up to the same level as the more successful phrases. It needs to sing on pitch, in a clear or resonant tone, with or without vibrato. Each short piece of writing is a micro-transformation.
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